How To Describe Someone

Peer response for: María.
By: Patricia.


Dear María in my opinion, you have done a good work because you describe a real person, but I think you could say more adjectives to describe your great grandfather´s personality. In addition, when you have more time you can make your description longer.The content of the text is very well and you have a good organisation.You can write more information and more details aboutyour great grandfather and how much importance he had for you.
I know you can do it better, but well done!




In my childhood I used to spend a lot of time with my great grandfather called Emilio. I remember to be really interested in all his histories about when he was young.
My great grandfather used to tell me his experience durning the Spanish War.
When I remember him, the first thing that going to my mind is that he was a very interesting, kind, handsome, educated and honest person.
He was not really expresive, but without want it, he taught me how to be an honest person.